We Are The WyreCats :: Glasgow Coma Scale
Glasgow Coma Scale in Prelude
20th Jun 2016, 3:32 AM
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Average Rating: 5
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20th Jun 2016, 3:32 AM

K.A. has been awakening in stages over the week, based on the Glasgow Coma Scale, in an attempt to infuse some credibility to this comic about kids in robot cat suits.

20th Jun 2016, 4:04 AM

Ain't this a kick in the head!

20th Jun 2016, 4:04 AM

Ain't this a kick in the head!

20th Jun 2016, 4:05 AM

I like where this is going so far. It has a very strong X-Men/Doom Patrol vibe going on and I'm very interested in seeing how far you take the superheroic comparisons.

My only suggestion, and this might be down to personal taste, is finding a way to make the Is that aren't supposed to be capitalized sans serif. The lettering isn't bad as it is, and it really is a horribly small thing.

20th Jun 2016, 4:55 AM

She seems to be on a healthy 14-15 now, though. SO I'm guessing we're looking at a framing device. Something bad done happened to the Wyrecats, and we're about to find out more about it. I always enjoy when fiction takes medical matters seriously. Too many treat the amount of time it takes the human body/what it is capable of recovering from too lightly, in my book. You're off to a good start.

23rd Jun 2016, 4:01 AM

Looking good, Neil. Happy to see this one's going to be in color! It goes a long way.

27th Jun 2016, 2:01 AM

Good start. I'm liking the concept. It does have a strong superhero vibe.

30th Jun 2016, 7:37 AM

I'm guessing this story will be told in anachronic order? That does seem to be your style, after all.

6th Jul 2016, 9:17 PM

Oooohh... Something tells me it's not necessarily the happiest story.

14th Feb 2018, 12:34 AM

An interesting way to start a story. I'm gonna be glued to this.

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